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| Dianaartemis 8/8/12 . chapter 1
'but they can smell the poetry on her skin' is an awesome line. I would consider omitting the last stanza just so that could be the last line. I also find that it encompasses the meaning of the last stanza anyway.
| Anatomical Liberation 6/18/08 . chapter 1
I don't know why ut this is oddly soothing. very pretty.
| smile for the sunshine 9/10/07 . chapter 1
i kinda like this. it's pretty.