Interesting. Can't wait to see what happens.

-TL

This is really good, very interesting. Funny too, I like that. Please continue!

I think this will have a good, humorous plotline!

Hm, interesting. So far I think you're doing a good job, especially since this is a different perspective, from the viewpoint of Adam and Eve (or at least Eve) rather than Genesis's old "And then the man... and then the woman... and then GOD..." and so on.

I think this is going to be a really cute, interesting story! Please add more chapters!
Oh, and you have some awesome grammar...good job

**! This is so well written. please continue it!