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| Penelope Quill 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abusewow this is amazing... I can't count how many times this poem could describe my life. It's so easy sometimes to chase after a feeling - after the powerful displays of God when all along what He desires more than anything is intimacy... hearing His whisper and Holy Spirit. Thank you for reminding me of this eternal truth. Keep writing for Jesus - you are very talented! ~Quill |
| Just.x.Keep.x.Dancing 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuse-sighs- I love this... Your poems are so ... what's the word? Reassuring is the only word that I can think of right now . . . but there was a different word that I wanted to use xD I love the last lines - 'The sweet sound of Your voice, Once again, I hear. Even in the softness of a whisper, You are there.' They're so sweet. Anyway, great job! :) |
| Captain Lucky 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely. I like the way you present it, almost like a story, but not quite. I also like how it's in second person. It makes it seem more personal. =) CL |
| You_no_me 2007-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful. |
| review 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseyour poems make me think of books i've read... : "I see you, Thomas. I made you. I love you. Sorry? Why are you sorry? For not loving? I love you Thomas. I love you. I choose you. I rescue you. I cherish you. I love you." -Elyon in Black by Ted Dekker : touching? no. at least not in the conventional sense. poems like yours are not touching. theyre moving to a point beyond emotions, beyond words...they give life and hope to the spirit. I love you, says God. and your poem is another reminder that He's just as desperate for our love as we are for His. |
| notwritten 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good poem. He speaks in a whisper. That is true. |
| Dyin2Live-John3.7 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseaw...that's so nice! thanks for reviewing my poem 'Come and talk to me'. I loved your poem (and this is coming from a girl who doesn't usually like un-rhyming poems). I hope to read more of your work (...what am I 'hoping' for? I can just read them right now ^_^) $u| |
| Needa S 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Loved it. Keep up the awesome work. Thanks again for your kind reviews. God Bless you. |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abusevery nice. you're writing flows very nicely like the wind you describe. ~*~ |
| FMA4EVER 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusethat is so true! i needed that so thank you for sharing it! thank u 4 being my friend as well meggie! you mean the world and i don't know what i would have done w/out u!! i heart you!! lol anyway, you're writing is amazing and the poem speaks the truth and does so beautifully! in Christ, FMA4EVER |