beautiful! once again =) sweet, nostalgic, and some breathtaking phrases
('two girls racing backwards in time')
wow...just wow..

An absolutely stunning piece. Again, perfect word choice. The imagery is beautiful. Very, very well done. Another to add to the favorites!

the rhyme is good, it could be a cool song.

Wow, this is really well written. I love the line "crayola promises, and a brilliant play-dough sunrise." Your words are beautiful.

k.X

Awwies! This is cute. Not what you probably wanted to hear, I know. But it is. xD

I love it
I mean,
I can get it like understand it and all...
It's just that...I don't know
It's really good