I was a little confused, but I liked it! :)

very well written. I like the twist.

Wow. I know that that is not a sentence, but it pretty much sums up how I feel about this. Just... wow.

Your writing is pervasive and precise. Your vocabulary is large, and your inclusion of classical figures, historically literary and mythological, is impressive. Your descriptive language is wonderfully refreshing, as most people don't bother anymore. I thoroughly enjoyed this!