I like it. I had the image of a little girl hiding behind someone bigger and stronger than her when read this. Keep up the good work.

Jeannie-Redd

you know i'll catch you every time..

great poem, the lexis is stronger in this one than the others and the rhythmic devices are spectacular

good on you

love you lots

I like the way the rythm suddenly changes in the middle. Makes it interesting to read outloud.

A couple of technical things to consider: line 4 "sometime" should be "sometimes", and I think you need a comma after "whisper" on line 9.

Overall, I like the way that your words and rythm show the way you feel about the subject.