Is that you? Don't know much about haiku, so I don't know how to read it critically. It seems to be suitably united. I've always thought haiku were too short to be much in a phonetic character system.

(By the way, dragonslayer isn't at your level. Say, can you teach me the knack of not being bothered by that? Hah.)

Alright, that's it for tonight. Do tell me if I'm bugging you.

I like it. I wish I could do haiku, I have no patience for it. Well done!

but whence will doust be found?

nice...

Very powerful piece, sad but beautiful. I like the repetition on the s sound in the first 2 lines, adds a touch of subtle darkness that works really well. Good job :)