Well, i'm going to assume this was your first attempt at writing poetry.. and even if it wasn't, the poem's actually not bad! for such a short piece, you managed to convey an appropriate amount of sadness and heartbreak. i don't think drama would be such an appropriate genre to put it under though- however i dont have the full list of genres here so i can't suggest a substitute at the moment.

i like the last two lines best! the bit about the tears is a bit juvenile to me, though, and also the poem is generally too short for my liking. that's just my opinion, though. you also repeated phrases too many times- i think it's not really a very memorable piece.

for a good short poem, i'd've recommended majnun layla by hey maria, but i just tried to find it and it's not there anymore!! i feel so sad now):

This is really good! If I were trying to change something in it, I might add punctuation. I think it is fine without it though. I really like your ryhme scheme in it too. A lot of times ryhming totally kills a poem, but with this it didn't do that. Nice job!

Really nice. I love this!

Love,
~Dia

aw.

that was very nice.

was this about a certain boy whose ** i would like to kick? :D

but it was still amazing. short and sweet and to the point. :D

sosososoosossoo good... (you know cuz i was there)

hmm i wonder who this is about... CHOUGHdannyCOUGH

xoxoxo

Short, but sweet, I'd say.
In spite of the fact it's...sad.
Dangit, I always say stupid things! *headdesk* Ah well. I meant it, very nice. Three thumbs up ^^ o.0