ok i have to say wow deep and i love the rhyming scheme and the circular path of the poem, the beginning is the end and the end is the beginning

did i not tell you, tis beautiful =]

and now i shall add this as my fav. poem =]

How sad and dramatic. Your writing made me feel it in my soul, and it felt good. I enjoyed this. Please write more.

ola rose, i love your poem =]