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Omok
2008-07-05
ch 18,
abuseFinally, you updated, and FINALLY its FINISHED! well, not finally, but...BOO its finished T-T lol x__x *high fives* I love cheesy endings too
chibichoco
2008-07-05
ch 18,
abuseAw... I liked it. XD Very cute and sweet ending. :) I really love this story. Great job with it.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0
2008-07-05
ch 18,
abuseamzing, a litle cheezy, but happy, just the way i like it. and thank god i was wrong! i dont think i could have handled any moe drama!
im going off to read your darkest story yet, but dont give me a heart attack!

youre awesome, congratulations
ciao
Sam
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Anxiety
2008-07-05
ch 18,
abuseThat was a good read... though I still think that the end seemed a little too quick, I would've liked for you to have fleshed it out a little more... but oh, well, it was still entertaining.

I just want to add, that I really like the line: "Peace needs a chance without me around to ruin it all."
Sy Itha
2008-07-04
ch 17,
abuseWhoot for loopholes (smiles)
Anxiety
2008-07-03
ch 17,
abuseTo be completely honest with you... I'm kinda disappointed. The whole end to the war didn't seem plausible to me. It felt like it was merely a deus ex machina type of plot device... especially with them getting along at the end.

Hatred can be a learned trait... even if they have forgotten why they were fighting, they'd surely have reasons to defame the other group (even if they are unfounded). Surely, Sasha isn't the first person to question why they are fighting, and I'm certain there would've been an answer other than: "Shut up and eat your dinner."

Inu did make a good point about peace and whatever, but I doubt that would sway the leaders who would probably be the most radical in support of this war.

It just doesn't sit well with me...

I have enjoyed reading this story, and except for that one part, it seemed fairly well done.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0
2008-07-03
ch 17,
abusepatience - i must learn this word
FINALLY you updated! but i am definitely not mad, i loved this chapter - so satisfying, but i feel that something is goig to happen soon - DO NOT MAKE THIS A SAD ENDING

youre awesome. always
Ciao
Samantha
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chibichoco
2008-07-02
ch 17,
abuseYay! Peace! Really nice chapter. :) I liked how you wrote Sasha to be stong, but showed how she wanted to still be her father's daughter. Also, the wisdom with when she was talking with Inu was great too. I really like your story and will be looking forward to your next update. XD
D Wat
2008-06-18
ch 16,
abuseAwesome story please update soon :D
X0ImaginaryGirl0X
2008-05-26
ch 16,
abuseIt's really good. There are a few mistakes here and there mostly just like "be" instead of "by" or something similar. I suggest just reading it over in your head or aloud whatever you do/like best.
Blac la Fey
2008-05-20
ch 16,
abusei love this story...wait scratch that, i love all the stories i've read so far. your doing a hell of a job, keep it up.
PrettyAwkward
2008-05-19
ch 16,
abuseThey're that much closer to each other, cool. Wonder what the plan's going to be.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0
2008-05-19
ch 16,
abuseonce again, you have outdone yourself, brava
and who is this lucky woman i presume? i ask no more questions. Its nice to know there are still open people in the world

i applause you for your work, although not masterpeices, they are almost second to none to them

i hope one day i see it happen, which i dont doubt will happen soon
kutgw, and i urge you to continue!
youre awesome
ciao
Sam
chibichoco
2008-05-18
ch 16,
abuseAww... I feel bad for them... I hope they can escape without much trouble... :) Really nice chapter, and I really like your story. I'll be looking forward to your next update XD
Rem-2669
2008-05-18
ch 16,
abusegreat update on the story
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