| Reviews for Fur and Feathers |
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Guest 2/20/13 . chapter 17 Once again, you weave a story with beautiful and amazing details. Thank you. |
stalker01 10/15/12 . chapter 18 The last sentence's just brilliant! XD Calling Sasha's story an antic. And this is one of the most fulfilling endings in fictionpress history! |
breakthehabit 8/31/12 . chapter 1Yo! So I read your story over the summer, I had no net [saved it on a usb] and I thought you might like a review, though it's mostly commentary. Here it is! Chapter 5: Uh oh. Secrets are bad. Great story so far. :D Chapter 12: And the plot thickens! Hannah and Kelandra, perhaps? Chapter 14: Eff the last sentence on that chapter. :P Guess I was right about Hannah and Kelandra. ;P Happy for em. Chapter 15: O_O Chapter 18: Aww. It ended. :X |
fellintothemoon 8/4/12 . chapter 1Hell there! Fur and Feathers had been added to our site A Drop of Romeo under the Slash category. YAY! Here's your review: Melissa Thinks: Fur and Feathers takes place in a world where two clans, the Airans and the Werewolves, live at war with each other. Sasha is a werewolf and not just any werewolf, but she’s also the clan leader’s daughter. As such, she must live up tot the expectations of the pack. Things go eiry when she meets Inu, an exiled Airan in trouble and after saving each other's lives, it is their duty, as is set by their clans, to serve a life debt to one another. Sasha, as a crooked-tail (a werewolf who fancies the same sex), she finds Inu a little too attractive for her clan's liking. She must keep Inu a secret and in the process she may just fall in love. I can always appreciate a good femmeslash story and as the Supernatural/Fantasy judge, it was a treat to read a mixture of the both. The first chapter set up the awesome world our characters live in, making me want to learn more and more about it as the story progressed. Shape shifters can sometimes be terribly cliché, but Fur and Feathers twisted the idea into something original. Sasha, as a main character, was strong and resilient with a bit of a softer side; I thought the author portrayed her well. And Inu was a sweetie pie and provided a nice mate for Sasha. There was a bit of a grammar issue at the beginning of the story, but it does improve in later chapters. There was also a little stiffness to the dialogue (one of my pet peeves), but it shouldn't be too much of a bother to any of you. If you're looking for something fresh and new, this is a story you should for sure check out. -Melissa |
Affair 7/8/11 . chapter 18Haha what a happy ending :) I sorta saw most of it coming but maybe I'm just an acute reader? Hehe. I enjoyed reading this, though I wished the ending was a little more dramatic and this story was long :p |
Affair 7/8/11 . chapter 10Oh dear sasha has got herself in a bind, 2 girls O_O well.. Inu sounds awesome :) |
Affair 7/8/11 . chapter 3I get it! She's half airan, and might be the cause of the great war or something.. They broke the rules, stupid birds :p |
With a Side of Chocolate 6/27/11 . chapter 18This really was a wonderful story. The plot flowed easily and the characters were very original. Good job :) |
sirozorg 3/4/11 . chapter 18Great story! |
Greye 11/2/10 . chapter 18 Wow! This was a really great read, thank you so much. (And I happen to like cheesy endings too, it was very sweet!) I've read some of your other things too, like Not so Happily Ever After, and I really like your work. Keep it up! I hope you publish a book someday. |
Sorrow86 10/13/10 . chapter 18Great story! ;) Thanks for an entertaining read! |
Micah7 10/11/10 . chapter 11Aw dam! Did NOT see that bomb drop! Poor Sasha...she has enough on her plate, but this...? Can't wait to get to the next chapter. |
Micah7 10/11/10 . chapter 10Um, guy striking a girl for any reason is wimpy. I don't care that they're friends, thats still low. But then again, they're not human... Also, Sasha prolly needs to break it off with Kel. I mean, why lead someone along and you're hurting too? Plus, she prolly dealt a huge blow to Kel's pride by stopping her in her 'ministrations'. Anyway, I officially dislike Stephen and I feel like he showed his true colors. :( |
Micah7 10/11/10 . chapter 8lol Sasha needs to make up her mind... Indecisions, indecisions... And what about Kel? |
Micah7 10/11/10 . chapter 7ooh shit's getting intense! lol I totally know that feeling like when your parents even get near the subject of sex and it makes you feel gross. lol dont get too noisy...ew so mortifying... |