 The Last Tuesday 2009-07-24 . chapter 18100th review. Swell.
This was reccomended to me by a friend and I must say that I did enjoy it. It's not everyday you come across goods fics that deal with beings other then humans. Great stuff. |
 Kagetori 2009-07-08 . chapter 18Heh heh... great story! ^^ I actually expected a lot of plot twists, but I think that's just me. Good job! |
 Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2009-06-22 . chapter 17Is this story by any chance based on Hawksong? If it isn't, sorry, but they also have 'Arians'.
Good story though, thought your characters lack developement, and I think their societies aren't alien enough to each other.
~Lillie |
 Violent Bear 2009-05-19 . chapter 18ok, over all this is a pretty cute story and pretty well thought out. Though I've got to say, that Inu and Sasha seemed to hook up REALLY quickly, don't get my wrong, I LOATH it when it takes forever for the main characters to hook up, but this seemed a little rushed, and that there wasn't enough time for the characters to click, ya know?
~Bear |
 Violent Bear 2009-05-19 . chapter 15ok... that so wasn't what I was expecting... ^^ |
 Violent Bear 2009-05-19 . chapter 8well this is kinda cool, tho I'm thinking its rather absurd that Sasha even being a werewolf... of sorts, can eat an entire Deer, usually a single wolf will just take the best pieces and dump the rest... so I think it would be a better idea, if she went for a rabbit or two... that seems more on the correct side of things... either way, keep it up
~dreamer |
 Darkshadow-lord 2009-05-11 . chapter 18 Very Nice Story!! I really enjoyed reading it!! |
 PhotonicEnigma 2009-04-03 . chapter 18I found this story to be a really enjoyable read. I think that you used the characters' interactions/reactions very well to guide/foreshadow/allude to other things within the story; hinting and driving the reader to think or make inferences, which serves to further develop interest and investment in the characters. As a reader I find it much more satisfying to find those clues and see if I was correct, than having everything explicitly told to me. |
 Crazy Dude, II 2009-02-21 . chapter 18Love it, original and wonderful. Thanks for the great read! |
 ernscherns 2008-11-10 . chapter 17 This was a very compelling story that took a well used idea, the children of two warring people's finding love in each other, and proved that it is infact a classic, not a cliche. However there are a few more... stylistic issues to work out. You have minimal dialogue between two characters who should have enormous divides between them. Also you don't seem to be able to fully come to grips yourself, as the author, with the hatred that would divide two peoples who have been fighting for so long they don't even know why anymore. I would very highly recommend reading Amelia-Atwater Rhodes book Hawksong for this purpose. Finally, the ending was unbelievably rushed, it felt you simply lost interest in it. |
 ItalianQT 2008-10-04 . chapter 18Aw! Cute story! Good job! :-) |
 femslasher 2008-09-16 . chapter 18I love how you manage to mix fantasy and romance between women. Great work! |
 Omok 2008-07-05 . chapter 18Finally, you updated, and FINALLY its FINISHED! well, not finally, but...BOO its finished T-T lol x__x *high fives* I love cheesy endings too |
 chibichoco 2008-07-05 . chapter 18Aw... I liked it. XD Very cute and sweet ending. :) I really love this story. Great job with it. |
 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-07-05 . chapter 18amzing, a litle cheezy, but happy, just the way i like it. and thank god i was wrong! i dont think i could have handled any moe drama!
im going off to read your darkest story yet, but dont give me a heart attack!
youre awesome, congratulations
ciao
Sam
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