i'm vaguely aware of the

that us fictionpressers

are growing up together

and for some reason

are all having spontaneous heart aches.

uhm, genius. enough said.

I like the philosophical bent that this has. It examines a somewhat vague, but relatable situation from several angles, and intices the reader to spirit through the fruit to get to the pulp, if that makes any sense. I also like how you've slipped in specific descriptions to solidify the totality of the work. Very thought provoking. Good work. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.

Beautifully written. You're very talented.