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| ValJoy 2008-05-30 ch 3, anon. | abusebtw,overall, ur story(ies) was still kool and sweet...if only real life always had fairytale endings..*sigh* =] |
| ValJoy 2008-05-30 ch 3, anon. | abusethe whole series was great and totally awesome!!(meaning the prologue,wait for you, and epilogue)..hope ther's a sequel to all this and yes the ending was a bit creepy..teehee! =] |
| Cynthia 2008-05-23 ch 3, anon. | abusethat was a good story. where did Darien come from? |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-03 ch 2,  | abuseAww, that was really sweet! I liked how they met up at the place they first met. Did that make sense? Haha. Anyway, it was good! |
| 12.06.07 2008-02-27 ch 3, anon. | abusethis story was very sweet. i like the fact that the girl confronted him on why they broke up! keep up the good work ;DD |
| Ashley 2008-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abusesoo tat dude hugged the wrong girls x.x Jamiee x.x goshh, why seh gotta go kiss a dude wif a guy alreadis? 0o errs? hahahs; i like yur phone conversations down there; its wat me & my ex used to eachother; cant make it, love yu, bye ROFLS:] |
| JeNnY :D 2008-01-06 ch 2, anon. | abusehaha i never saw any story like this :O but its like a show almost :] his feelings x] |
| Raymond gao 2007-10-09 ch 3, anon. | abuselol, dam i never thought that your a so dam good writer. i think u should continue with this story like, add more details and make like a miniature book. DAM, THIS IS THE BEST ROMANCE BOOK I EVER READ AND IM SO SERIOUS!! THIS IS WAY BETTER THAN ROMEO AND JULIET!XD P.S. you spelled fresh wrong xD |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuseIt was very cool, actually! |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-09 ch 2, | abuseIt was sort of really romantic and beautiful! |
| Morii 2007-10-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really like how you used the song or poem thingy. lols I noticed a few mistakes unless I made a mistake. lols But all in all it was a very good story. ^ ^ |
| Cat Baloo 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusekeep going, i want to see him win her back |
| It's not always easy 2007-09-15 ch 3, | abuseaw... so short. =( that saddens me. |
| It's not always easy 2007-09-15 ch 2, | abuseaww that was so sweet. ur such a good writer omgg. u put me to shame |
| LisaKiwi 2007-09-14 ch 3, | abuseaw how sweet! ^_^ me likey! write a sequel PL0X! plz plz plz i luv it! wah... more more more! XD |