This was a good story! The proposal was a little rushed though. Keep writing beautiful romance stories!

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this is the sweetest story.
i love it. honestly.

it was a great story but then the proposal was kind of sudden. but it was draggy so that's good. plus i love how they both ended up at the same place. it would have been so much more interesting if Angela didn't forgive him so easily. hehe i like it when people get angry at each other bwahaha xD

btw,overall, ur story(ies) was still kool and sweet...if only real life always had fairytale endings..*sigh* =]

the whole series was great and totally awesome!!(meaning the prologue,wait for you, and epilogue)..hope ther's a sequel to all this and yes the ending was a bit creepy..teehee! =]

that was a good story.
where did Darien come from?

Aww, that was really sweet!
I liked how they met up at the place they first met. Did that make sense? Haha. Anyway, it was good!

this story was very sweet.
i like the fact that the girl confronted him on why they broke up!
keep up the good work ;DD

soo tat dude hugged the wrong girls x.x
Jamiee x.x goshh, why seh gotta go kiss a dude wif a guy alreadis? 0o errs? hahahs; i like yur phone conversations down there; its wat me & my ex used to eachother; cant make it, love yu, bye ROFLS:]

haha i never saw any story like this :O but its like a show almost :] his feelings x]

lol, dam i never thought that your a so dam good writer. i think u should continue with this story like, add more details and make like a miniature book. DAM, THIS IS THE BEST ROMANCE BOOK I EVER READ AND IM SO SERIOUS!! THIS IS WAY BETTER THAN ROMEO AND JULIET!XD

P.S. you spelled fresh wrong xD

It was very cool, actually!

It was sort of really romantic and beautiful!

I really like how you used the song or poem thingy. lols I noticed a few mistakes unless I made a mistake. lols But all in all it was a very good story. ^ ^