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| Cosmical Sage 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow... It's short but it's very intense and to the point. It made me shiver. What a wonderful way we have to make our problems go down the drain... |
| Laura Schiller 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOkay, now that is just gross. Talk about too much information, I did not want to know this. |
| RavenclawMoose 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was a good poem, though also sad. I hope you can find another way to deal with whatever is making you feel the need to do this. I know one of the things I do, when I feel like crap is to make paper snowflakes. I get to cut something to pieces, and what's left is something beautiful. ~RM |
| changed.by.an.afterthought 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseu know, no one told u to stop, or that it was wrong to do so in ur reviews... i guess that's my job... it's not the answer, but i won't stop u...because i cut myself and i dislike hypocritical people. - changed p.s. i'm sorry u feel this way...nice job though, it is a great poem, ur really good. |
| Ramenluver 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. I like this one the best. It's very well put. *faving* |
| criti-sized 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThis poem made me kinda choke, lol. Wow, I guess individuality is a great thing, but self destruction is self destruction regardless of how it's looked at. This was a nice poem, and the title fits it perfectly, because though it's about a girl who's into bulimia, it's her definition of suicide. C.S. |
| say this sooner 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusewow! i loved this one. a LOT is said in these few words. nice work! |