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| changed.by.an.afterthought 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseare ur friends expecting u to be perfect? cause mine are... nice job, i totally agree. - changed |
| criti-sized 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThis doesn't exctly remind me of a poem, it kind of sounds like a quote, no offense. I'm not saying that it's bad, because I mean the exact opposite, it's really good. In it you managed to portray a short story about a girl/boy, I;m not certain that doesn't understand why someone insists on being a friend or more. C.S. |
| J. Kim 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseShort and concise. I enjoyed reading it, gets the point across in seven lines. :) |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseOH MY ** GOD! sorry i was on caps lock! that sound so much like my pathetic existence! i have alienated most of my school with my death glares. and obsession with death. it's so beautiful, sometimes. will u read my story called "robbers and romantics"? i would love u! and review and i would love u more! |
| say this sooner 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusei liked this, it's very relatable to a lot of people. well done! |