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changed.by.an.afterthought
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abuseare ur friends expecting u to be perfect?
cause mine are...

nice job, i totally agree.

- changed
criti-sized
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseThis doesn't exctly remind me of a poem, it kind of sounds like a quote, no offense. I'm not saying that it's bad, because I mean the exact opposite, it's really good. In it you managed to portray a short story about a girl/boy, I;m not certain that doesn't understand why someone insists on being a friend or more.

C.S.
J. Kim
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseShort and concise.
I enjoyed reading it, gets the point across in seven lines. :)
TheNarglesWillEatYou
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseOH MY ** GOD! sorry i was on caps lock! that sound so much like my pathetic existence! i have alienated most of my school with my death glares. and obsession with death. it's so beautiful, sometimes. will u read my story called "robbers and romantics"? i would love u! and review and i would love u more!
say this sooner
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abusei liked this, it's very relatable to a lot of people. well done!
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