|Reviews for Vision in a Time of Unrest|
| Tytherpol 9/22/07 . chapter 1
oh this is beautiful.
i started off thining 'ew not again please'
(because i'm a little tired of people (me included) describing people like it's the end of the world.)
but the ending, second-from-last stanza on, made it great.
awesome job and really cool idea.
| Yokotaashi 9/13/07 . chapter 1
random idea, short and sweet
| Ashes0909 9/12/07 . chapter 1
I loved the ending, so true. Especially loved the line about Sangria, the one word really helped with the mental image of the girl in the poem. Good job :)