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lhbui 2008-09-25 ch 8, anon.	abuseHello, Your story was HILARIOUS. I laughed out loud to myself so many times. I must say that I was a bit disappointed with the realism of the story because Bobby was straight throughout the whole story. However, that made the story good because it was believable. COntinue writing. Good stuff
Miss DeBlanc 2008-09-13 ch 8,	abuseHello! I found your story on the forum for Honeydew Sindrome and I must say that I love your story! It is very realistic and it amazes me that a man older than my dad could write something so comepletely out of a teens point of view. Not many older than 30 ever can write the thouhts of teens. My dad agrees that the bit about Bobby faking to be gay is absolutely hilarious and said he could only just imagine what it would be like to be in the closet about being straigt. Turns out hes gona have to get himselve a very queer atitude very soon, cuz he just got casted as a gay servant at a restaurant in some german movie. Imagine that! Lol Anyway, I loved this story to pieces and am going to chech out your other ones right after this dot.
firestar267 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseI loved this :) its really well written and the characters are very well developed, thanks for the great read
D's Silly G 2008-05-27 ch 8,	abuselove it love it! i really like Bobby, he turned out to be pretty darn kool in the end and i like that, unlike most stories on here, he stayed straight, it was a nice change. Sad what Alex had to go through and how he thought it was the only way :(
Cari Marie 2008-05-26 ch 8,	abuseYay! I finished your story. Very nice. I read a book with sorta but not really this plot line. I was about this girl and a guy who liked each other and were getting to know each other over the internet but they were both neverous so they had their gay best friends do the im-ing for them. So then the two gay guys start to like each other but they think it is the other girl/boy. So in the end the figure it out and it was happy ever after, or something like that. Cari Marie
Cari Marie 2008-05-26 ch 7,	abuseSo I'm reading Alex and Bobby right now. Only 2 or so chapters left... it's very...um... squee is the only work I can come up with. So I don't put anything on my profile cause I don't write so not many people look at it. So no, I'm not 12. I happen to be 18. So about me trying to find you... Don't worry, my Dad's in the military so I could try to convince him to take me on a "vacation" right. Because I totally would, just b/c I find it funny. Cari Marie
Pundit 2008-05-13 ch 7,	abuseLMAO! Oh, I was in fits when I read this. Poor Bobby. No good deed goes unpunished. He seems to have a thing for Fag-hags that like to tease him. I love this story. The characters are fleshed out and you're narrative voice and diction are amazing.
MistressELEMENT 2008-01-07 ch 8,	abusewow, and i mean wow lol this was hilarious, sweet, sad, and just hilarious and sweet mostly. The ending was the cherry on the icing on the sundae. SERIOUSLY. this was fantastic. i was sorta hoping bobby would end up gay but denise was good enough for him. XD great job. X's, -E
Keelala 2007-12-15 ch 8,	abuseI didn't like the end. At all. It's not the usual 'Aw, already finished?' either. It's more that it fell totally flat for me. First, I never found public humiliation of any form, entertaining. I think their payback, though somewhat a bit deserved, was way out of proportion. I tried to read it as fast as possible to get to the good stuff. Or so I thought... I didn't see Bobby change THAT MUCH that he would be so quickly such a good sport about it. From hothead to Master Zen, I didn't see that one coming. The little synopsis-thingie about Alex and Chaz was a bit disappointing to me. That's definitely not what hooked me to all the previous chapters and I'm not really interested in how it played out. The way it was quickly delt with makes me think I may not be the only one either. Which brings me to the main bone of contention with this final chapter: from the moment Bobby puked, I thought that this story might be one of the most interesting and intelligent love story I've read in a while. A bit ironic but yeah... Anyway, when I say love, I'm not talking about romance, but about friendship. Its intricacies are not very used and certainly not often with the hindsight there was in this story. So I was kind of expecting it to end on a more introspective and mature note. Not my story, not my decision, of course but it doesn't mean I have to like it. So there.
Cedric Kale 2007-12-09 ch 6,	abusewo go chaz he's awesome and funny. so does this mean bobby's bisexual
Shounen-ai 2007-12-06 ch 6,	abuseGood chapter. i don't like Chaz though. well you prolly figured that much about me already. i hate surprises and Chaz was sorta a surprise. well yea...i thought you went a little fast with having another weird relationship with a gay guy who i don't like. just saying though. and you know i'm not good at reviewing so just forget i said any of this and such.
True.Randomness 2007-11-28 ch 8,	abuseAs I was reading this story I couldn't help but fid Alex painfully naive when he was with Chris, the bastard. I was dying of anxiety that Alex wasn't being happy, I was so glad in the when he ended up with Chaz that nearly cried. I am so glad it had a happy ending.
Shounen-ai 2007-11-18 ch 5,	abuseanother great chapter and i'm glad Chris is gone since i didn't like him that much. Renee is truly funny, she reminds me of myself though i don't say how cute boys would look together out loud, just in my head. Can't wait for the next chapter ~Shounen-ai
Shounen-ai 2007-11-18 ch 4,	abusewoah...well i'm not that good at reviewing these kinds of stories but that chapter was nice..and well i don't know how to say it. The fact that i'm reviewing this says that you did a good job at writing this. I like Renee, you thought out her character well. ~Shounen-ai Boy Love
Jordan 2007-11-16 ch 8, anon.	abuseI Love your stories. I was so sad when The Girl For Me Ended, Now this one's over too :(. Hope you start something new soon . THanks for the good read.

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