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| Dot Cubed 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this was cute! It was kinda hard to tell who was speaking at times, but I thought it was adorable. I would've loved a bit more insight into why the guy decided to marry someone else in the first place, but that's okay. |
| SparklingStar25 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseso sweet! |
| painted.music 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusekonban wa Wow, this was impressive, especially for a first piece posted. I probably wouldn't call is a story, though, since it's more of a flash fiction than a short story. *shrug* In any case, it was beautiful. I loved it. [ author alert] Ha det -Shan- |
| Pinkamoo 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseAw! Very creative, and sweet! Not too sappy :) |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really adorable story! I love how everything came back, and even though there's no real description, you can still tell everything thats going on, even the timing. Amazing job! -Aria |
| chinkybaby18 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abusejust plain sweet. :) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI actually like the style of this; it's very different. I love the beginning (when they're little). So cute. This was well-written, different, and very very awesome. (: I loved it overall - especially the sappiness. :] It's a great first story on FP, and I'm very happy xoxluurve added it to our c2. (: |
| katie valentine 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseaw first story, but quite good you know! kept me reading till the end. its so cute! :D |
| Just a Little Loca 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet. I thought it was good– I like the motif you used. I don't think it's too sappy– but then again, I'm not really a good judge of that. I like your penname, by the way. Looking forward to more of your writing. |
| Saphimire Karishnikova 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOMG. FIRST STORY?!?!?!!? It was beautiful. Love dialogue. |
| Kadence 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely! :) It was cute and endearing. I can't wait to see more! |
| gummybearmurder 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseAw this is really cute. :D |
| hypengyophobia 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseSweet ending =D |
| halo-all 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusethis is your first?...no way!...You're really good! i loved it. |
| -insertsomethinguniquehere- 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is so swett! even though it's short. i really liked it. :) |