i like the story so far(im only in the early chapters). the first person parts are a little confusing, but thats probably why. the poems at the beginning are also a nice touch. Youre developing these characters wonderfully. lovely.

what an interesting, yet odd beginning.
even though i don't usually read slash there's a dark and contemplative undertone to this that i like.

i'll come back later.

Adorable, really well written:)