That was good. I know that personally i have problems describing myself in 2-2 minutes.
" Some people will tell you that you can judge someone by their music collection, but I question that, as the only logical conclusion that can be reached by people looking at mine is that I suffer from multiple-personality disorder."
Best. Line. Ever.

Keep writing.

Hey! I have no idea what attracted me to read this... but I did. I rather liked it, too. Speech writing is hard, but it sounds like you did a good job with it. Kudos. ~CD