Reviews for Screaming Divinity

redinthesky 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseI love the slam poetry format! I could really feel your frustration at the beginning there, especially with the repetition of the word Scream. There is hope at the end. Great job!
BornToThePurple 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseThe message is strong, the emotion is palpable...you express yourself well...but it reads more like a rant than a poem.
steinbock 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseyeah, not so much rhythm in it... but the words and the message were wonderful. Great job... and you're right... there's a quote out there "we have to be the change we want to see" well done