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| the flaming river 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseYou should continue this. It's fun and has a lot to do with prejudices which is great. Please please continue! I know it's hard but still! Please? |
| Paquine J. 2008-06-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow this is a really awesome story,really well written, and funny. The man character, Diana is cool,but annoying in abitchy sort of way, but she seems to pull it off woth good taste. Please do continue writing though. |
| oh y'know.that girl 2008-04-23 ch 4, | abusei really love the characters in this story. they're all unique and they're all really funny and cool. i'm still wondering about whether or not Diana is interested in Zeke but i like luther too. update soon please! |
| LoveMySoul 2007-10-31 ch 4, | abuseI really like this. The whole being in love with the emotionally dead best freind, well I don't think I've seen that in any other story. Can't wait for the next update. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-20 ch 4, | abuseNice job on giving us more insight in to Di. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Nara Merald 2007-10-20 ch 4, | abuseWhat an interesting story! I love Diana! She's such a **- ruthless in an entirely I also liked Luther, and can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Yukiko-snowchild 2007-10-19 ch 4, | abuseHi! your story is going great so far. You establish the personalities of the characters very well. Update soon! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-10-19 ch 4, | abusei couldn't even count the amount of times you dropped a designer name haha but hey, its her character, guess it works and wow amanda, wait...miranda, sorry she seems a little...too gulliable but ooh twins haha those two are interesting can't wait for mroe izzie |
| outsidersgirl 2007-10-18 ch 4, | abusethis is good |
| OniRoi 2007-10-18 ch 4, | abuseInteresting story so far, though I do have one comment to make in regard to Diana's agnosticism. Agnostics are usually people who believe that there can be no proof either that God exists or that God doesn't exist. They believe, yet don't believe in God. Therefore it's unlikely that Diana would vehemently detest the Grace. From Diana's reaction in this chapter I'd say she's an athiest because she says herself that she doesn't believe in God. Anyway, good chapter. Hope you update soon. |
| Jacoby.Rae.Grace 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOh! Wow, Zeke, what a guy-- lol. I love the main character, Diana, she's my favorite. ^^! I love the first chapter. =] chek it, JRG |
| outsidersgirl 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abusethis is good |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseso...how old is everyone exactly? coz in chapter two you said she was nineteen and i'm somewhat confused and kelly and molly which one is older?? the story is good so far i like it but there are bits and pieces that are confusing like ages of everyone can't wait for more izzie |
| Limited Edition 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseNow, you can find Jimmy Choo for 700 (if it's cheap), but not DKNY! DKNY is much cheaper XD It's cheap enough for them to sell it in my crappy country. I'm in a damn crappy mood, that means I don't say nice things. Ever. I never read chapters longer than 10 words, much less swallow them. I certainly never read stories about bitchy girls like myself, and I sure as hell never enjoy them. So I can say with ease: You're underrated, 'cause I just did all that. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-26 ch 3, | abuseGood chapter. Looking forward to more. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |