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| Artemis Anderson 2007-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseI love the sensory details you used here. Wonderful work. |
| randompoetry 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseoh my...you gave me butterflies. and made me want to cry because i'm feeling the same intense feelings this poem described. and i hate seeing other people get the words out better than i could (but i love that it was you with your genius talent) |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAww, honey, this was so bittersweet. I love the title. I think it fits so well. And the one-liners work really nicely with the poem, too. Keep writing! :) |
| Kicking Poe 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abusethe longing expressed here is sweet, but there is also a sense of such emptiness - as if she never really believes that he (or anyone) will ever touch her like this. by the way, I love your poems because they so often say what I feel but can't put into words myself. so, I bow before your awesomeness! cheers. |
| Imperia 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseaw, this poem is really cute! ^^ |