I liked this. "We're hundreds of miles away but we'll never be apart" is too true in my life at the moment. It's too bad some wrongs never do end up right, but it's nice to read the optimistic poem after a nice pessimistic evening. Thanks for a poem that made me smile.

- Lady Glass

aw. so sweet

Ahh, I love it.
Very sweet.
The 3rd part is very remeniscent of you. XD

I love this poem! There is something enduring about opposites in romance in a thematic sense that make this a stunning poem. It has emotional depth and power of simplicity that carry it very well. I feel it speaks to me.

I likes it. It's good, and gets your message through clearly. I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I likes it nonetheless. Huzzahs for Rosa!

Okay, I'm not very big on romantic poems. Romance and death are so popular with poetry; they're almost cliches themselves. But, regardless of the subject, I love this! Rhythm, rhyme scheme; it's all there! I do wish, though, that you would've used a little variation with the rhyme scheme. A B just sounds a little too mother-goose, you know? Besides, as long as you've got rhythm and a good enough vocabulary to rhyme without sounding forced, then switching up the rhyme scheme should be no object. It just makes poetry sound a little more mature. great job!