Oh wow, I'm lost for words, I really am. This is beautiful and is going right to my favourite stories list.

Thanks for the review, as well!

Rowan.

I just have to say that I am in love with the italicized "I am fetal/Morphing with every step of/Time"! That is just so brilliant. The lack of periods in conjunction with the commas was confusing to me, though. I wasn't sure where thoughts/clauses began or ended.

marie

Wow...just wow.