aren't you going to continue it? its really good!

Wow. I LOVE this story. Continue. please!

This is definitely an interesting story you've got going here. I like the potential so I think I'll keep an eye on you. Just watch your spelling in the next chapter. But other than that, good start.

I liked this story quite a bit. It's got a great first chapter. Keep writing! :)

great beginning! really cool! i wonder if you've read the forestwife? if not i think you would very much enjoy it! keeo it up, very much enjoying this! fran ~*~

Pretty good beginning.

This story has potential.

Looking forward to more.

Good luck with writing and this story. :)

~Twilight Starr~