Reviews for The Little Puppeteer

Alteng 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseI have had some troubles at home and at work. I am playing catch up again! Anyway, I am not poetically inclined, so I can't say if it is good or bad or how to fix it. As far as the content, it does have some nice imagery of Pinocchio in it, and it is kind of romanctic with the girl at the end who has received the toy/boy. I couldn't resist.
White-Dragon-Goddess 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseLittle boy with your wooden toy I'll try to be soft and sweet. My dear friend, beloved one Your strings are safe with me. A kind hand for his wooden heart I'll try to handle it with ease, but silken strings are delicate things and its you I wish to please. I know now, little boy with your wooden heart and wooden toy, that these tiny fragile strings, are very much a part of me. What connects his wrists, connect my own. What holds his head high holds mine too. His strings and my blood coincide, so with blood, I know this to be true. Dont worry my friend, for cant you see? For this puppet to walk, he doesnt always need me. But I'll always hold out a stable hand to the wooden boy hiding a flesh toned Man.
i_kiss_to_tell 2007-09-14 ch 1, anon.	abusethis reminds me of pinnocio! (i have no idea how to spell that so i hope u know wat i'm talking about...) i liked it...kinda haunting in a way tho... much luv Sarahh
BornToThePurple 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseI really like this alot. Good job.