Reviews for The Summoning Crystals

KrimsonRain 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseO_O whoa... some spelling mistakes but pretty good for the fitst chapter, makes me want to read the next 4!
tyedye7272 2007-11-28 ch 2,	abuseUmm... I'm not even going to say anything about this one. I'm not gonna' lie. It's not very good. Peace out, and good luck, Tye:(
tyedye7272 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseUmm, to be totally honest, not very good. For one, never start out a story by giving list descriptions of your characters. If you can't figure out how to describe them in your writing, then i might suggest finding some other hobby. Also, you kind of had a very repetetive sentence structure. There were a few places where you should have taken out a conjunction and split the sentence in two. Describe what's going on. Don't just say "He used his wind magic." Say something like, "Be waved his arms and created a gust of wind that knocked him out of the way." And don't say "he looked at his brother with such disgust, but his eyes softened..." It sounds terrible and confusing. Pushes is spelled with an s, not a c, and it should be pushed rather than pushes. The sentence where he looked at his sword didn't work at all. Um, yeah, that's just about it. Peace.
Greekfire 2007-09-14 ch 1,	abuseHow are these lovely Japanese children going to do deal with their power crystals? You didn't expect them to welcome them and not struggle at all, sirsly, that's bull.
Iccle Fairy 2007-09-14 ch 1,	abuseinteresting beginning! great start, very intriguing and fast paced!