Smacks of Poe, in a way, but the style is entirely your own. Great atmosphere, elegant structure. This is an excellent read.

Interesting. Indeed.

wow. dude you had me the whole time, definitely hooked me in. it was a good one for sure, i like the different twist on vampires, sorta. not sure if thats what you were going for. a major twist on Satan and God though. nicely done.