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| molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. You have a gift. |
| J.K.Ellis 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseTo begin, the aesthetics of this poem are simply lovely. Then the physical representation of this journey home is extremely vivid whilst employing a sense of universality. And of course it calls to mind the Greek tale of poor Echo and her love lost (though not directly paralleling the fable). |
| Julian Toepfer 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abusewow this is a good one. it creates such a strong flow and really pulls you into it. i really enjoy the line 'and nestles soundly there'. something is really powerful and dark about that line. you always create such a mood with your work. favorited! sorry i havnt reviewed you lately :P school has me pretty busy |
| Eagle Seance 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseExcellent rhyming! It was refreshing to read a well-crafted poem like this. Most young poets prefer to write free-verse these days, and they're really good at it too, but it's hard to come across a good rhyming poem. I'm sure your other works would be just as good, so I'll read more now... |
| Ramenluver 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. ^_^ Like how you compared it to walking. -Ramen |