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| Slayerschmo 2008-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseLoved the piece. Thought that the jumpiness of the writing went well with the events taking place at the time. Large dumps of background info are never good. They always need some action to them so the reader does not get bored, which I thought you did very well. |
| blue ruin 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThis confused me a little but as I read on I was like, ohh. okay. gotchya haha. Very good. Interesting and disturbing. I liked it though. Very nice :D. |
| Luckie 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseHot damn... That story was amazing. I loved how jumpy it was. Confusing at some points, but you eventually get it. Thanks for giving me something good to read at work :P By the way... I loved the ending line. |
| dangelicessence 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI've read this and I'm not certain whether or not want this in my favorites. I know it was very interesting and wonderfully written but...I am disturbed beyond all words. And trust me, that's a very difficult feat, to disturb me. |
| Belladonna Wyrmwud 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusewow...I really like this. It's not often that you find a really good short horror story! I hope that you continue writing, and that your future stories are just as good or better! ~Bella |