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XxkOuRtAnYxX 2008-06-24 ch 8,	abuseI absolutely love this story! It should be published and for the entire world to read. Your an amazing writer. I just can't get enough of this story. Your my favorite.
Tor 2008-06-08 ch 8, anon.	abuseperfect story, adored it. cryed, smiled, all that. :)
Enaid 2008-06-08 ch 3,	abusethis is simply amazing! you have outdone yourself. did you do any research because your language choice fits perfectly for that time period i feel like a jane austin novel. the story line is really funny too.
LeticiaLiebtTokioHotel 2008-05-22 ch 8,	abuseHahaha, A highly unusual ending but a great one at that! This ending is even better than 'and they lived happily ever after'. Haha! Awesome story! Great job. :)
Me... 2008-03-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseI read this story a few months back and it is one of my favorites on this site. The writing is able to capture emotions so that it feels real and the characters are down to earth and just completely adorable. Just wanted to encourage you!
Inky-Angel 2008-03-10 ch 8, anon.	abuseI absolutely love this story. It's a shame that it's so short, but, it was great, so I guess that makes up for it. :D
ReadWriteLive 2008-03-07 ch 8,	abuseWhat a cute story... good plot, good character development... only thing you need to do is check grammatical/spelling errors...lots of "he looked good in the gown" type things =) keep writing, I'm looking forward to more things!
beautymarked 2008-03-07 ch 8,	abuseThat was a super cute read and I really enjoyed every moment of it.
gulistanlik 2008-02-16 ch 8,	abuseOh WOW! I absolutely loved this fic! My stomach was doing that dipping thing when Alex talked about how much he loved Madeline! I like the fact that an inncoent love was portrayed here! I found some parts funny but also some parts immensely sweet and I was awestruck at home caring the two could be. Wow. I loved this fic so much that I am going to favourite this. It would not suffice to leave it un-favourited. I wish I could do more! Gah! I can't truly express how this fic made me feel! It really really touched me, really. It's like a fairytale romance, I suppose. and I was absolutely livid with Emily. Keep up the good work and thank you for an excellent and enjoyable fic! ^_^ gulistanlik
xHUGx 2008-02-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseJeez, talk about being selfish.
Lady R 2008-02-12 ch 8, anon.	abuseThis was such a cute story! Three cheers for Alex and Madeline!
j.m.burford 2008-01-08 ch 8,	abuseSimply gorgeous!!
Andy Yua 2007-12-07 ch 8,	abuseThis was a wonderfully sweet story and I really hope that you'll consider cleaning it up. Unfortunately, there were many, many mistakes in terms of typos, grammatical errors, and word usage but overall, this was a great story. Alexander was a hero I could easily fall in love with. He was kind, understanding, and a noble knight protector as well! A little more explanation/ history of WHY he is so drawn to Madeline would round out his character. (eg. a mention of how they met, a few more examples of how they were friends) Madeline is a character with a great deal of potential. I would have liked to see her grow a bit more though, to learn to get over the taunts and gain confidence in herself. I'm not quite convinced that at the end, she's any stronger. Please consider editting - it will be well worth it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing!
Anon. 2007-12-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseGreat second chap. “Come—let us to the drawing room.” "Come-let us proceed/head to the drawing room." (Or something of the sort) Alexander had changed so much she felt unequal to him. (Not 'like' needed there)
Anon. 2007-12-02 ch 3, anon.	abuse"...that was not my intension." is not right. Intention. and mind you, nearing the end, it's touched his heart. good work nonetheless

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