So, moral of the story? Turn off the darn alarm clock. lol.

Very interesting take, and entertaining too!

This was great! I loved the way it just rambled on, but was always controlled.

I'm not quite sure which one I liked better. They were both quite funny and lightly sarcastic. You have a great writing style.

Loved it. Awesome job.

~GryphonFledgling

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Wow, you can't seem to make up your mind, can you? In the first scenario, I mean. Everything seemed to be going great, and then the divorce -- sad -- and then one of your sons saves 412 people -- great! -- and then your other kills 411 and commits suicide -- sad. Make up your mind, girlie! LoL. :)

Loved this. And I loved the bit of humor at the end: "(Plus, you get to eat your pancakes.)"

*grin* I really liked this. *adds to favs* Write more soon, please!

Zaijen
-Shan-

You have put this in the category of humor - but although you have a nice light writing style, I wouldn't call this humor, exactly. More like thought-provoking. I like how you move from the very small things that happen (e.g. going back to turn an alarm clock off) to the very big things such as the son killing 400 people. Actually, the parts about the 412 people must have been my favourite. For one thing, it was a cool thought when one twin stopped a number of people from dying, while the other killed the same amount of people. (Not likely, but an interesting thought anyway!) And finally, I liked that neither scenario was entirely good, and neither was entirely bad. This made it much more real.

very good, very clever! good to read. very light writing style which i like"