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| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting. i like it. it's different. |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseYou are truly something: "it should come as no surprise that the inflation of your ego led to the evaporation of my volatile being." A map of my life and some of the grim happenings in it. You portray the life of a stranger (me). I relate in every way, thank you for this! Always, Stephen |
| bittersweet.season 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusei love it. its thats simple. |
| Aquafied 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseit seems rather vicious towards the subject. akin to watching someone fall out of grace though a movie screen. almost like this poem needs its own theme song. |
| Ashelin 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. The way it flowed, particularly the ending. But I adore endings anyway. "it's funny how/your blue eyes/are less blue to me." Loved that part. Great job, and thanks for the review. |
| nomsi 2007-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abusei like, i like. pretty and... satisfying? inspiration? |
| machstick 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Lack of grammar put me off a touch, but otherwise, it kicked me in a good way, most especially the final stanza. I like the cheek in it :-)Top work. M*G |
| multiples of six 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I can't put my finger on why - so there's not really a point to this review - but I really like it. =) |
| Simon L. Dosley 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseI love how people go through the effort of posting on this website and they can't even use proper grammar. :/ But besides that, this was pretty good, and the ending was really fucking awesome. Way to go. |