OMG! This story is adorable! I absolutely love it. I can't wait for the rest to be post, esp. Oscar and William meeting ;)

I hope that is not the end. I am so excited to find out what happens when William comes face to face with her Uncle. You write amazingly well. I started reading it this morning on my home computer, but had to find it on my phone before I left just so I could finish it. I just couldn't put it down, and my grades probably are gonna reflect that.

Great writing!!

I very much like this story so far:)

As cliche as the plot is - I like it. The story is very character driven which makes the cliched plotline works. It has the whole fairy-tale feel to it - in a good way :)

Very well written. Can't wait for the happy ending!

:))

lovelovelove it!

cool

Hah, my suspicions were right about Michelle's uncle being the infamous rival for William's firm!
Now, I just need my other suspicion to prove me right (or wrong) that William's secretary is the wife of the security at Michelle's hotel who got the tickets for the Monet exhibition and give her sometimes homemade dishes :)
I'm looking forward to reading more!

Well, I'm at ch6 and this story took most of my day - not that I'm complaining, I'm really enjoying this^^
I'm looking forward to the party/ball, but I'm afraid that remains for tomorrow (it's almost midnight here). Oh, yeah, chapter 4 was a little long in my opinion, although it was worth it :)
Have a great day, full of inspiration!

~Arvael

Don't know what to say, liked the flow and no blatant over catching imaginations floated to my mind reading you. Sort of female i guess, presenting the 'Prince'.

Still, not really my cup of tea, but still very well done.with good and patient 'footwork' creating the scenes from the bottom up. As a writer said once when he heard about a famous character.

"No I'm not interested in his table partner, what I want to know is how do he hang up his hat as he come in, what do he do with his gloves." You seem to understand the importance of that :)

And romantic, undoubtedly so.
My felicitations madam,

Ah what? "a manly chin"

Now, what is that? Grand Canyon or?
Hmm, afraid that that was a little to much for me.

I presume you write mainly for the more sensitive part of the human population :) Not that I mind, but mainly it made me smile I'm afraid. Like Cary Grant meets Cinderella. a pity really. You had such a beautiful precise flow at your first page and then this?

It's still 'good' but it's not what I expected, but I will read some more. We still have hope here girl :)

Nice one, with a slow cool start, looking forward to the rest.

oh dear, this is quite possibly the sweetest story i've ever read :') the characters are so likable and lovely. i'm glad authors like yourself exist on places such as fictionpress. i do enjoy the idea of traditional relationships, and wish they were more prominent. now i want to find my william! british men

wow i love the story so far, so much that i couldnt wait for the ending and i bought it!

Your stories are amazing, I love them. I think forest of lorien is very touching and loved the ending, I read it when you published on fictionpress the first time. Thankyou for providing well-edited and crafted free fiction to the world.