Reviews for Draw Me A Picture

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the kitten 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abusethis is so... brilliant! I mean it, you really have talent! have you published it yet? I've seen a link to a site, where you can buy it from. maybe one day I'll find it in a book store. I like how you put the cinderella concept into another light. she seems sweet, yet not helpless. he seems powerfull, but has no intention of abusing the power he posesses. the characters are well defined, everything they do is just natural for them to do. thank you for posting this I hope you'll write more, I definitely enjoyed it! kitty
zagato 2008-07-21 ch 4,	abuseHi! Thank you for your update! I read your story and have it as one of my favorites.
Deeps 2008-07-19 ch 4,	abuseAwesome! please post the other chapter soon
ForeverWasteAway 2008-07-19 ch 4,	abuseomg, seriously, please stop using your stories as blogs! It's annoying. You're bumping up your fics for no reason. You shouldn't be advertising new stories in all your other stories. I'm sure people can find said story themselves, if they really wanted to =P
Little Comet 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseI don´t want to sound rude, but I agree with bananamilkshake. By making it so you have to buy the story, you´ve narrowed down your audience by a lot. I´m gonna be blunt here, so, head´s up: If I´d realized how many typos there were in the version you have for sale, I wouldn´t have bought it. Please, please, please, start using a spell checker, and go over everything. Maybe even have someone else go over the drafts with a colored pencil, and have them circle the typos. On the whole, I think you´ve got a great story idea going on. Your characters interact well, even if it is sometimes a little corny. They are likeable, and there aren´t too many that my head is spinning trying to remember who is who. You have likeable main characters who have believable back stories, which is sometimes really hard to do. Also, why are you using fictionpress as your blog? You can use all sorts of websites to create a blog, and then you don´t have to worry about changing the chapters all the times.
AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-11 ch 2,	abuseAww...
AudacesFortunaJuvat 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abuseOh geez. This is really, really good. Write more, okay? ~Fortie
Abigail Night 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abusei
McQuinn 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseHi there! Overall, this was a lovely read. However, three things annoyed me while reading--the first being the horrible punctuation problems (mainly in your dialogue) and other grammar problems, the second being the dialogue (some of the things your characters say are just completely unbelievable. For example, Michelle saying "My word" a couple of times had my eyes rolling), and the third being Michelle's constant blushing, which bothered me a bit--both the fact that she was blushing so much and because the descriptions of her blushing were a tad repetitive. Other than that, I enjoyed this! You drew a marvelous picture with your words, and I love your characters. They're both simply charming, and Margaret and Alfred are entertaining to read. I see you've gone ahead with publishing--good luck with that! I look forward to reading more of your work soon. Cheers! -McQuinn
N.M.E 2008-06-15 ch 3,	abuseI loved this fic. Sadly, I'm still under age and I'm not American. So I cannot pay money to read the book. But I so badly want to finish it. If only there was a way... Anyway I loved it!
Nopotofgold 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseI love the story. I love how you up some of the story so that it could be read and let the people decide if they want to buy it for the rest. I have bought a couple of books that i though were good and read a few chapter and lost all intrest. I am going to buy this on to read. You are a very talented writer with a great ideal for PR and exposure.
Slender Smile 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseHi.its an awesome story and i loved it.awaiting badly for its ending. -S.S
naningxoxo 2008-06-07 ch 2,	abuseo.o -> o.O -> O.o -> O.O I totally mean the change of expressions I wrote. Hours beforehand, I was writing a review saying that the story was good but it was missing something. And I believe that your story defintely has the thing other stories are sadly missing. I can't possibly believe how talented this story was written. It is truly amazing and something I constantly want to read. Unfortunately, I have to take a shower right now but I WILL be back. Or else my brain would explode from the lack of amazing stories.
Isabella22 2008-06-06 ch 3,	abuseI absolutely liked this. It was really cute, but I was extremely disappointed when I learned the rest was on fictionpress, and I don't think I want to pay for a book with just knowing the three chapters. All I have to assume is they get married and live happily ever after. It was great while it lasted.
Wonka 2008-06-04 ch 4,	abuseI hope since you're actually charging people to read your story that you've edited it much better than the chapters posted here. Your story's good, but there are better ones on here that anyone could read for free. Good luck to you.

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