absolutely lovely! i can't wait for more!!

Wow, it's such a great story! They make such a cute couple. I love it!

Can't wait for the next update!

-quann

oh my gosh i am so glad that i decided to read this story.
It is just so sweet and romantic that i was smiling as i was reading it. i really cant wait to read more and as it is already 12 a.m for me i cant really think anymore so good nit and pls update soon!

Such a lovely couple...I hope that he will be able to propose without any mishap occuring along the way...

lovelovelove it!
update sonn!

Aww, this was a sweet and exceedingly long chapter. Yay! Anyways, I just wanted to say that while I do enjoy this story something has been bothering me. Michelle. I don't mean to offend or criticize, I just find Michelle to be a bit on the unrealistic side. While reading Michelle's point of view all I could think was that she seemed to be someone straight out of a guy's fantasy: you know the type, innocent and pure and just waiting for some handsome man to come and sex the innocence away (pardon my bluntness). Michelle is in her twenties right? Well I've never encountered a woman her age who seemed so incapable to have primeval thoughts and urges. Her witty comments and jokes show that Michelle does have a more lively side, which is why I find it so out of place when I see that she is so reserved in thought. What I mean is that when she thinks about William her thoughts are sugar coated; she mentions that she is physically attracted to him but her description of her attraction is like that of a little girl not of woman. Her thoughts are sickly sweet and don't quite match up exactly with her spirited demeanor. She doesn't have to have elaborate sexual fantasies but a desire to express her lust/ love for him physically would be nice. Once again, I am honestly sorry if I'm offending you right now and I'd like to emphasize that offending you was never my intention. My point in writing this was to ask you to consider making Michelle less childish and more grown up. she can still be innocent, she just doesn't have to think like a little girl in order to do so. Thank you for your time.

i lovelovelove the story
cant wait for more
hope you update soon
--ifly*hugs

This story is absolutely brilliant.
I'm so attached to both William and Michelle!
They both seem like such wonderful people.
And your style of writing is very witty - I love it!
Update soon!
Lorento.X

You are a very talented author; if you published this, I would be sure to convince my library to purchase a copy :)

Please post more :)

Will more be posted?

I'm sorry to say that from your summary I did bot expect this to be so good. But it was! It's amazing! AMAZING! lol I'm getting carried away...as usul. But this is a great story and I'm completely in love with it right now!! :)

yay does this mean i have two more wishes left:D
its really heartwarming heehe really fluffy though i do wonder that michelle seems to have more money now then she seemed before, but i guess it kinda goes with the story:)

aw
its really good please update!

good story development, though the background isnt very believable. but it is fiction, after all.

Is this book only available online?
and normal book like this is around £6 - £7 in England
so how come its like $24.92 which is around £13
Actually i dont care about price but is it available in shops, i fit is is it in England, because my parants never buy anything online so my only option to actually buy it from a shop