this story is just darling! please update soon its beauiful!

So he hasn't made the connection between the two Williams yet, or is he just testing him?

ooh - I cant wait of ind out Williams reaction to Oscar being Michelles uncle!

soo amazing it rocked my world!

hehe. I LIKE Uncle Oscar! I can't wait to see William's reaction when he finds out his new boss is also his new uncle in law!!

aw shucks! I need another chapps PLEASE!

Honestly, this story is honestly quite moving in its simplicity (I'm bookmarking this as a favorite for sure). Michelle is so utterly endearing (I think William is a super lucky guy- but that's just me...)

this story is very lovely, and something that i have been wanting to read for a while. it is very nicely constructed and the use of monologue and description has been spread out evenly.

i cant wait for the next chapter.

oh.
Here comes uncle oscar.
he sounds kinda like the boogeyman...

amazing story.
Poor michelle :'(

I didn't understand her uncle's relationship with William

FANGIRL SQUE~~! I absolutely loved this chapter. I really liked how Uncle Oscar is amused when Michelle hopes he'll meet WIlliam! I adore your writing style; its got detail but it doesn't get you stuck there, your's has just the right blend

This is a wonderful, uplifting story! Furthermore, it is tremendously refreshing to read a romance that doesn't have the lovers "embarking" on the honeymoon BEFORE celebrating the wedding. THANK YOU so much for that--some people actually DO manage to wait until marriage, but one would never realize it from some (most?) stories written. I absolutely LOVED it!

Some technical comments, however:

1. Throughout your story, you use the non-word, "alright," often. "All right" is correct. (Please check the dictionary to assure yourself that I'm right about this.)

2. You often use "whom," when "who" is correct. If the sentence or phrase sounds right substituting "him" for "whom," then use "whom." Otherwise, use "who."

3. Your sentence structure is fine, but minor spacing errors would benefit from a having some knowledgeable person serve as copy editor to review the chapters--even a well-trained secretary with an objective eye could serve you in this capacity.

Thanks, again, for this terrific story! :-)

Congrats on your acquisiton :)

That was awesome! I really love this story!