Thanks for updating. I wish I could see the picture the photographer took of her; sounds beautiful! What I don't get is why Michelle doesn't really warn Laurel of the kind of person Luca is. As in she did, but I didn't think she'd actually let him flirt with her if she thinks him such a bad man.

I'm really enjoying this story, and am glad that you're updating more quickly. I can't wait to see what happens next- I admit I spoiled myself and read the beginning of the sequel.

As usual, thanks for the update. I'm wondering if Oscar set up both the Brazilian client and the woman at the bar to test william's morals. Anyway can't wait to keep reading.

Ms. Greene, you always pop up with another chap of DMAP when I need you most. Thanks. Anyway, I'm excited to listen to you reading for the audio version, love it when the authors read. XD

I only just read your story for the first time today; I enjoyed it immensely. The way in which you write is wonderful, and I find myself eager to read more.

Sincerely,

Breanna G.

They are way too adorable! Haha. Looking forward to more cheesiness!

Thanks for the quick update! There's something I love about the two of them; they are so perfect for each other. Man, Uncle Oscar just won't let things be easy, huh? But I always look forward to seeing what he has in store for them next. Hope you update soon.

Can't wait for William to meet Oscar! Haha he'll totally get the shock of his life :D How fun! And I think the sweetness between the couple is really endearing. I enjoy reading about it a lot. Keep writing!

Ahh. your editing(: I couldn't help but read this story again. I thought I would drop you a review to tell you, I did spot a mistake. A very small one but one nonetheless.

3rd paragraph:

Michelle had dressed with care; she still owned a nice everyday outfit. Under her blue coat she had on warm, black tight, black ankle boots, a red plaid kilt-style skirt and a crisp, white blouse.

at the little mark , you said black tight, when I think you meant to say tights not tight.

:) Thought I would let you know cause I got a bit confused there!

LOVE WILLIAM 3 MICHELLE :)

Aahhh that made my night when I saw you updated! Can't wait to read the next chapter. I love Michelle's rambling voicemails :)

Youtube videos, yeah!

Ok please please update soon I want to read more of this story.

Hahaha Oscar is such an entertaining character and honestly quite weird :) Can't wait for William to find out who he is!

Now this is more like it! Can't wait to read about Friday dinner! I'm curious as to oscar's intentions. He seemed shady to me at first, but now I see a more tender side to him...interesting.

I liked this, as usual. It'd be nice to have a bit more plot development, but since you're only revising now and the story is finished already, I know you know what you're doing :) At the same time, I realize why this chapter is important to the overall story. I guess what I mean is, I want to see more emotions out of Michelle than just sweetness! She is witty and funny (as seen in other chapters), so it'd be nice to read more of that side of her.

Thanks for updating!