Thanks for updating! Have a wonderful holiday :)

I have to admit something...I'm guilty of already reading the sequel.

I always cry at weddings...excuse me... ;P

Oh my goodness, I love this chapter. It's so descriptive and enchanting, but also so real. You've captured the characters feelings and emotions perfectly, the uncontrollable smiles, and the tears. This chapter's truly beautiful. The photographer is a really funny guy, and good at his work, I can almost see him just gliding around the room unnoticed taking wonderful photos. The apple blossom bouquets are really quite beautiful when you think about it, apple blossoms are gorgeous and smell wonderful, I will have to keep them in mind for me one day. I am still very pleased that I found your story here, and I can't wait to continue reading. Thanks so much! :)

Pepper

You described everything very well, though it would still be nice to have photographs. The wedding was beautiful. I look forward to reading more, although I'm not sure about how many more chapters there are?

That was precious! I loved the detail with which you described everything.. but I can't wait for Michelle and William's on-going banter which in the next chapter. :)

I almost cried. Scratch that. I cried.

Oh my goodness this story is amazing! I started reading it yesterday and just finished it (though it's passed midnight now so I guess I started 2 days ago). It's wonderful! However I thought it was completed and now that I see it isn't yet I'm saddened because now I'll have to wait like everyone else did to read it! :)

Michelle and William seem so real to me. Their little quirks and emotions, I see it all as how someone would actual act. You've got them down pat. I feel like I could run into them on the street and I would recognize them. It's great! I wish that someday I might be able to express and relate a character so well to the reader. I also can see so much of myself in Michelle - her shyness, the way she thinks, how she reacts to certain things, her artsy side, her love of simplicity and honesty, and how she's willing to wait until marriage. I love the families. Ms. D'Angelo was a wonderful character, just like my little Italian aunt - motherly and always wanting to help by fussing over someone.

There's so much I would love to say about your story, I wish I'd taken some notes or something while reading. I'll do that more with the next chapters since they'll probably be one at a time. (Though I do hope they come swiftly?) Your story is one of the best I've yet read here, and one of the best I've ever read. I love it. I look forward to reading more of this story and your others. Thank you, not only writing something so wonderful, but for sharing it. :)

Hope to read more soon, keep up the awesome job.

Pepper

Update soon! 3 3

To be honest, I was hoping we'd see more of how Michelle has to fight back to her future in-laws, kind of like the side we saw of her when Luca was relentlessly hitting on her several chapters back. What happened to that Michelle? I thought for all William prepped her, she pretty much had a smooth sailing evening, contrary to what we were told to expect. I'm not saying make it more dramatic, just more eventful. Either way, I was glad to see an update and look forward to more.

Very nice :D

Especially love her spirit :3

This is all just leading up to the wedding night. Anyone else excited?...other than William.

Ok, best part, when he held her ankle..Ooooooooo

...until they are massing on the front lawn, erecting a gillotine."

I am still laughing. The rest of the chapter was good, but that comeback made my day. Thanks laugh.

Aww... I loved it! Seeing this, makes me wonder about the wedding. The ceremony, the reception, maybe the jitters before... the honeymoon! I was so pleased to see that she didn't take Anne's crap! I also enjoyed Lucas and Laurie's little heartfelt exchange! So sweet and so surprising to see Lucas acting like that. I guess, all people meet their match at the end. Gives me hope, as well. LOL