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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is just fantastic. What a great example of how to use a rhyme scheme. It seriously fits the piece, I think because it has this almost sing-song quality to it, and the piece is about that entering into another season, perhaps entering adulthood, as it were. God, I LOVE "to reclaim our ill-fitting skins." That is just fantastic. Gorgeous. This is so incredible. Fantastic work. Keep writing! :) |