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| BornToThePurple 2007-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the nature imagery in this poem - the caterpillar was a nice touch- the poem went in a different direction than I expected. Have you thought of dividing this into two poems, one about the the kids cutting school and one about being in the woods? Just a thought. Good job! |