Yay! It's a new chapter! Haha cool chapter. I'm all curious about what's going to happen next, so I hope you'll update again soon. :)

O you finally update =D I was wondering when this notorious chapter you were writing a while ago would be actually written up. But one question, what on earth is up with the text body format coding at the beginning of the chapter? Just curious as...well it makes no sense really =P

Other than that i still like the chapter, it took me a while to get in sync and made me smile at how eerily Amber reminds me of you

''...i speed''

Right =3 [[speeding in the rain...oi vey xD]]

Uhuh =P Police officer =]

Well, atleast 99% of the officers i know do XD whats the point of a supercharged car if you arentgoing tah use it? =P

Looking forward to your next spurr of creativity =]

Sam
xx

Wow. Just wow. So good. So, so good. I love...well all of it really, but especially the parts with Jade and Anita. The whole idea is just so cool. I also like how the girls are kind of awkward and unsure about how to...interact with each other? It's hot :]
Hope you update very, very soon.

...

Okay i love the Jade and anita thing...but who the hell are Jenna and Amber? Was that part of a play or something else because i swear ive missed something becayse i literally im sitting here struuck dumb asking myself. - what the hell just happened?

But i do love you! At least you updated, thats all i care about :3

But seriously im confused.

Can you explain pleasE?

Sam
x

Woah... nice chapter. :) Will Amber and Jenna be a couple too? I hope Jack gets kicked :P hahaha. I'll be looking forward to another chapter! XD

Yay! An update! XD Nice chapter... a few spelling errors, but nothing too bad. I'll be looking forward to another chapter sometime hm? :)

I am lost.

i can't help but think how they got to that point. :P Interesting chapter and it's good to see things heating up even more.

YAY! This was a really nice chapter. XD I'll be looking forward to your next one. :)

Sweet. Please do update soon. I like the fact that Jenna sees all this..

amazing!
YOURE ALIVE! i was hoping against hope that you hadnt given this up and yes! thankyou you havent.

it amazing, short but it grabs a readers attention. thumbs up!

keep it up! please dont give it up!
youre awesome
ciao
Sam
x

this story truly is amazing. please, 1update, it had been ages andi hope it will be a happy ending, i beg you.
dont stop writing this story or else i swear to you i will hunt you down and slap you siilly :D

oh and i have realized something weird, you always spell "lose"
as "loss"

any idea why? :P

youre awesome, update soon! PLEASE

oh this is an interesting piece. It contains angst and allure and well I think that it is great. I hope that you update soon.

love it
amazing, i swear
please uppdate soon, the story is awesome

but whatch the word 'loose. loss, or loose' becuase you are mixing them up wrong :P

lawl, anyway kutgw and ill see you later!
youre awesome
ciao
sam

Eww... I don't like that guy! lol
Great chapter ^^
Aww... she should have stayed!
I really like your story, and I hope you'll update it again soon! XD