Reviews for His Brother, My Rival

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Kaiyako Kagami 2008-03-08 ch 20,	abuseHey! This was such a terrific story, I totally loved it! I'll admit, at first I did think that Daisuke and Shunya were going to end up together, but I liked how it ended none-the-less. I thought maybe, only if you want to, you could write a sequel story about Ryoko and Daisuke. Cuz they're so uber cute! LoL, oh and if you do write a story about Soh, I'll be sure to read it because he was such a fun character. Well like I said, terrific story, I hope to see more of your works soon. I'll be sure to check out "Shichihou no Fluff" LoL. Normally I'm not even really a Shonen-Ai fan, but this story actually changed my perspective on it, so that I'm even trying to write one myself. You're really inspirational. Thanks, and Great Work! Kaiyako Kagami ^^
sage 2008-01-23 ch 20, anon.	abusereally crys this time >.
Sage 2008-01-23 ch 19, anon.	abuseNo! crys!
sage 2008-01-23 ch 18, anon.	abuseThreesome! XD
Sage 2008-01-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseDaisuke!
Guesswho 2008-01-02 ch 20, anon.	abuseGuesswho would like to tell Redlady that she is a great and should keep. As for the Soh story, It sounds like fun and Redlay should post it. Guesswho would read. Thanks.
Gao Yun Yun 2008-01-02 ch 20,	abuse-Pouts- Oh, pooh. No tears. But, ah well, it was still a wonderful ending chapter! It broke my heart to a million and one pieces, that's for sure! Poor Dai-kun, I can only hope he finds a girl (or guy) in the near future. And for once, I'm actually rooting for Koami-chan. Wonderful story! You should be very, very proud of yourself- you've dragged someone into reading and becoming a fan of a story, when said fan wasn't exactly a huge fan of the subject. You've been awarded with over Fifty reviews for a Twenty Chapter story, and heaven knows how many fans came with the reviews. You've even gotten a fanart done for the story!! (which will, hopefully, be posted up soon, if I can ever get it scanned). I'll be sure to check out you're other story sometime soon! And once again, wonderful, wonderful job! I just can't stop with the praise, so I'll finish this review right here and now. With the best of wishes, B2I
Gao Yun Yun 2007-12-25 ch 19,	abuse(laughs) While composing this Review in my head as I read this chapter, I knew for one thing that I'd mention the fact that, for some odd reason, I was on the verge of tears when Taka-kun said goodbye to Shun and Dai-kun. And then, while skimming through you're author notes (Sorry, I'm supposed to be doing Extra Credit work over the Break, and I wanna hurry up so I don't get in trouble!), I noticed the note, and was even close to on the verge of tears! I don't know why, but it makes me feel like I did something really awesome to be mentioned in someone else's story! So, yeah, I was close to tears, which is good enough, in my opinion! And..even though I hate to say it, I AM a bit dissapointed. (laughs) Actually, I switched from my Dai-Shun pairing to Dai-Taka, and was hoping that Dai-kun would admit the way he felt when Taka-kun confessed. But that's just my opinion. And I am nothing but a lowley fan of this awesome story. So is the next chapter the last? I'm sure I'll actually start crying if it is, just because something I like is going away, never to be seen again...or maybe that Soh story will finally make it's way to FictionPress? Either way..great job! Oh, and I would answer that question you asked, but..I'm afraid I don't know what "Uke" and "Seme" means. Heh, should I? Well, sorry for the long review! And great job!
Lai Anderson 2007-12-24 ch 19,	abuseWow... I was prepared to flame you when I thought this was the ending, 'cause it popped a hundred question marks in my head! I don't like Takahashi that much but he was kinda entertaining. And then I think I seem to like Daisuke's character more than Shun now... the little brother's being too aggressive lately, haha. It's interesting how you planned it out this way, if he really chooses Taka-kun then there wouldn't have to be incest, ne? Haha. I'll watch out for the last chapter and your next story. Hmm, I have a romance story about a sensei and his student but it's hetero... and i don't have time to put it out anyway. Just Happy holidays.
Lai Anderson 2007-12-23 ch 18,	abuseWow, the story's ending? I never thought it was already close to the conclusion... I mean, now that Shun's really conflicted about his feelings... hm, I'm curious! Hehe. Keep it up, I'll be reading. I might not be updating my own stories for a while since I'm abroad and busy with a lot of holiday stuff. =)
Gao Yun Yun 2007-12-19 ch 18,	abuseNoes! I can't belive it's really almost over! Please, do an awesome job, and be sure to make me cry, okay? I know it's a weird request, but I wanna remember the ending of this forever and ever and ever! And I always remember things better if I cried during them...weird, huh? Oh, and, I'm so sorry! I keep forgetting about answering the Soh question you keep asking, and my answer is most definitly! Keep up the good work, and remember, make sure to go out with a bang! (Then again, I shoulden't be telling someone who's a much better author then myself what to do...(laughs))
Lai Anderson 2007-12-07 ch 17,	abuseWee! I guessed right! I knew it... Koami likes Dai-kun! Somehow I like this pairing now, hehe. And Shun... he surprised me there. Wow, I didn't think he could be so aggressive like that. And by the way, you actually write juicier romantic moments than me. Haha. Can't wait what happens next. That was a great chapter!
Gao Yun Yun 2007-12-07 ch 17,	abuseWah! I'm so sorry for not reviewing the last chapter...I was going to, but then it slipped my mind (like so many other things seem to lately). Either way, woa-ho-ho!! Awesome chapter! Though now, I'm blushing like mad and wishing I'd just skipped the rather..steamy..part. Even though I've read make-out scenes about a thousand times, I always blush and feel like I'm taking a bite of the forbidden fruit... Hah, anyway, I'm a bit depressed. Koami-chan likes Dai-kun, and Shun-kun rejected Dai-kun..but, I'm confused. Does Shun-kun like Daisuke, or no? It's so confusing!
Lai Anderson 2007-12-02 ch 16,	abuseAh, Daisuke is so clueless... he's funny. Haha. Anyway, it was quite refreshing to steer away from Shunya for a while and have Morita take the spotlight, or at least share the spotlight with Dai-kun. I'm excited to know more about Koami now, hehe. Thinking about it, your story will make a great anime; I could even imagine Morita's hilarious antics on screen! However, I can only read shounen-ai, not watch it. Haha.
Lai Anderson 2007-11-14 ch 15,	abuseShunya is really weird sometimes. His being indifferent is not weird, it's when he acts otherwise that intrigues me. Haha. However, I'm glad he didn't end up with a kiss from Takahashi. I'm not a fan of Taka-kun for some reason, he's just too annoying for me... no offense. But then I'm restraining myself from liking Dai-kun for his brother too, 'cause it's just... well... unnatural. Haha. That's just me. I think I'm still scared of these shounen ai things. Keep it up.

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