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| Twilight Starr 2007-09-18 ch 2, | abuseUh oh. It sounds like she is going to get into trouble. Looking forward to more. ;) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning. This story has potential. "Your what?" should be "You're what?" fathers should be father's. Looking forward to more. The plot looks good. Good luck with writing and this story. ~Twilight Starr~ |