I like this one too. I think the format here is nice. I like that lots.

awh! sad!
i read this as a song, i don't really know why...lol its good!

gorgeous. love it.

Great poem.

You have a bright future. :)

~Twilight Starr~

that was good! there's one thing i don't really get, though.

a future i what I hope
I don't know what's next, except for darkness.

uh, so the darkness IS the future?

hahhaa. i suck at analysing poems. ehe.

it sounds like a cool song, really the rhyme is good.