 smile for the sunshine 2007-11-04 . chapter 1I like this one too. I think the format here is nice. I like that lots. |
 daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-10-11 . chapter 1awh! sad!
i read this as a song, i don't really know why...lol its good! |
 Kissing Concrete 2007-10-06 . chapter 1gorgeous. love it. |
 Twilight Starr 2007-10-01 . chapter 1Great poem.
You have a bright future. :)
~Twilight Starr~ |
 found.eventually 2007-09-22 . chapter 1that was good! there's one thing i don't really get, though.
a future i what I hope
I don't know what's next, except for darkness.
uh, so the darkness IS the future?
hahhaa. i suck at analysing poems. ehe. |
 kloun mannequin 2007-09-21 . chapter 1it sounds like a cool song, really the rhyme is good. |