Gasp! That was so cute! Your writing is amazing! I love all your metaphors and figures of speech in here. It really makes everything come to life. ^_^ I really like your style! I'll check out more of your stuff sometime.

- Nina Bananas

Well yeah. Even I could of told you that. This seem like it will be a great and terrific story of love, heart break, and more. Keep it up!
-Undrahas