That was a sweet ending. Great job with this story! It was interesting to watch Jesse's character develop from a silent, resentful kid to being loved and cared for by Michael, Jonathan and Liza. I'm glad you took the time to write this, it was a good idea.

Hee hee...now it's clear where Jesse gets his troublemaking nature from...

Aww...yay... :)

Okay, I'm finally back! Jesse really is quite a troublemaker...I mean, he really went to extremes here to crash the party! But you give a great insight into his character that lets the reader know some of the reasons why he does the things he does. If he understood the motives behind his foster parents' words and actions, he probably wouldn't want to cause them so much trouble...

Aw, this is a sad story so far...but very good. This chapter was sweet, with Jonathan trying to reach out to the silent boy. The FHF people seem like jerks...they don't deserve the positions that they're in. I'll be reading more of this... :)

*cheers*
so cool.
sometimes the foreshadowing was a LITTLE too obvious, but it was a great story over all. good job!