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| Loveless Breath 2008-09-02 ch 6,  | abuseWAHOO! HALLOWEEN...BEST...HOLIDAY...EVER! Your story's awesome. |
| Innocently Tainted 2008-08-16 ch 10, anon. | abusehahahahaha, i love this story. It's funny, querky and original. Troy's a good character, unlike many others that people write about. You've just made me really happy 'cause of this story. :) |
| a beginner 2008-05-30 ch 10, | abusewow |
| Kanilla 2008-03-11 ch 10, | abuseI hope I don't hurt your pride when I say that the bloopers were what made me laugh like a lame moron more than anything while reading this story. Especially the one with Victoria exclaiming that she too has "that kind of boxers". Holy hell. Loved the bloopers. And the ending, neat work on that one. It ended in a good place alright. Reading this makes me want to write something crazy myself, but yeah, not my style. Gotta love this moronic goodness though. -Kanilla ps: Nicky DID enjoy his b-day together with Ollie and Hail :P |
| Tears of My Heart 2008-02-09 ch 10, | abuseGreat story! It was really funny to read, and you really feel bad for Troy even as you want to smack him on the back of the head (in a total good way :) Sequel? Maybe? LOL. |
| Tragic and Devastated 2008-02-09 ch 10, | abuseI loved the ending, and the bloopers were hilarious...more than hilarious. My gawd, I loved it *hugs AG* this is my favorite end for the month... scratch that, year. XD ~Mel |
| Loveless Breath 2008-02-09 ch 10, | abuseSmallville theme song: Remy Zero - Save Me Who Let the Dogs Out - Baha Men Google is a strange and beauitful place. Check it out sometime. I loved the outtakes--you should really make a movie out of this. Good luck to you in the future --Vivian-- |
| Loveless Breath 2008-02-09 ch 9, | abuseLol. this chapter was crazy! loved it! keep writing. |
| Kanilla 2008-02-08 ch 9, | abuseYou know what's actually the funniest thing in this story? It's Troy's zipper. His zipper cracks me up so badly. I can just imagine in my wicked little head what a "zipper singing an anthem" looks like. Priceless. Nicky says congrats to Troy for finally getting a little piece of his vixen, woot! I like his confidence, and damn, you made me crave lemon there, you big bad meanie! -Kanilla |
| Tragic and Devastated 2007-12-31 ch 9, | abuseHave a great New Years too!~ This was a really cute chappie. uhm, is cute the right word? uh... probably not. XD That guy, Rob, had his fun didn't he? At least he knows when to leave... if he had stayed Troy woulda gotten really fed up. Poor baby ~_~ Anyway. Amazing chappie. Update the last soon (last chappie no, lolz) ~TAD |
| atreyu love 2007-12-30 ch 2, | abusei really like it :) |
| Tears of My Heart 2007-12-29 ch 9, | abuseYay for updating! Great chapter :) |
| Kanilla 2007-12-09 ch 8, | abuseLate coming review, but it's here. The fight was pretty funny, especially before it when Troy was debating with himself whether he should get involved or not. Priceless! And boy, Rob really is an unlucky bird. I'm curious to see how he knows Victoria. And really, I'm glad you let your poor boy finally have some self confidence. It was sorely needed I think. -Kanilla |
| Loveless Breath 2007-12-07 ch 8, | abuseCool. thanks for the shout out, chapter was awesome, update soon. Troy has a thing for weggies? okay... |
| Tragic and Devastated 2007-12-02 ch 8, | abuseHah, he really had an adrenaline rush in that fight. Go Troy. Need more guys that will actually put up a good fight for a girl. hawtness |