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class.act 2008-07-14 ch 5,	abuseWow, this stuff is so great :) Actually, practically everything you have up on your profile is great (specialy the one-shots) but I really have a soft spot for fantasy/supernatural. So... I'm guessing that almost everyone in the town is not human... and that they're not one of the cliche mythical creatures, either. They probably have wings... and just somehow I get the feeling that they're not entirely good, you know? Like the slightly-evil-hot-possesive-demon kinds :) CJ's secret is pretty confusing... at first I thought that she knew all about her powers- "someone found out about her family’s secret and used it to defeat her on court"- but the whole thing with Hannah just pushed me back to square one. Then again, even Chris seems unaware, so I don't know about the 'family secret' thing... But the last conversation CJ had with Damien threw me off again... "He knew"? Did he know how it happened or did he know why it happened? God, this is so confusing. But in a really good way :) I've noticed that you haven't updated in a while, please write more soon! I can't wait to know what happens next.
pinkeclipse 2008-05-27 ch 5,	abusetheir father is someone important? thanks for the chapter!
katieee 2008-05-13 ch 5,	abuseThis is so weird. But Im majorly intrigued. :] I still think they're vampires. And her father's one too. Or her father's Damien in disguised. Or he told him about his kids. Or her father's one of the biggest vampires in town. :]
katieee 2008-05-13 ch 4,	abuseI seriously love this. :]
katieee 2008-05-13 ch 3,	abuseWow. I think they're VAMPIRES. :] Like Edward Cullen. (L) I like him.
katieee 2008-05-13 ch 2,	abuseI wish I could run like her. Im practising. Im not a very good runner; I don't run. At all. Im going to tomorrow though. :] And I really like her determination. :]
katieee 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseAwh, I love her. I feel so bad. But I don't doubt that I'd act the same way. Bryan's so swet. :]
xoxo1 2008-05-05 ch 3,	abuseoh damn, i was just about to say vampires but i saw the comment you left at the bottom of the chapter ahh, update soon please :]
Forgotten Sunday 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI Love This Story! I Really Hope You Update Soon!
White Rose Blossom 2008-03-16 ch 5,	abuseAck, so sorry it took me forever to read/review this chapter! Dun dun dun! it's getting more and more mysterious...I love it :D Cant wait to read more, great chapter! -Aria
bla8 2008-03-02 ch 5, anon.	abuseO.O upi have to update still need to know what letter is saying
bla8 2008-03-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseDaddies connected, with freaky towwn,a nd Damien ♥ (shudder) okay now I have to kown what hte letter says ONWARD
bla8 2008-03-02 ch 3, anon.	abuseI've figured out their not vampires. . . . . or werewolves, I think. . . . just something. . . . something that eat people Ah creepy feeling I love it ♥♥
bla8 2008-03-02 ch 2, anon.	abuseOk, so far I really really really really like it even if Damien is giving me the creeps, and so is his mom, and Bryan . . .with eating.. . .but I still really really really really like it and Ireally really really like Damien. . . theirs a lot of really's in that. . . well on to the next chapter
kardula 2008-02-24 ch 5,	abusethat is the first story that i read which had this supernatural thing in it and i have to say that i'm really enjoying it despite the fact that i'm not really fond of such supernatural stories... but your story is really intriguing and i really want to know what exactly the secret is and what'll happen next, esp. what role their father played/plays in the whole thing... so i really like your story and hope that you're going to update it soon cause i can't wait to read more. ^^

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