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| Cloudsinthesky 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI don't think I've ever read something of this syle before. It's very interesting, I like it. You capture the emotons nicely and the question at the end tips it off. |
| XxVendettxX 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusewow...you have some great lines. i love the style and concept. |