I like this and i now see what you mean that you have changed your writing style...to me its kind of wierd only because i can't tell what italized words aremenaing. Do you know what i'm talking about?? well anyway i still like the poem.

I really liked this. Yeah, I know. I like horribly sad depressing things. But the last stanza was really good. Also I adored:

"The tears in my eyes
fill up my writing with
cliché-ness.
But at least, they take
up lines."

Great job, as always. Now I feel like writing...

This is so sad... poor perosn. An excellent display of hope without faith. Cool... I love when you write like this which is actually often... yay!

Sad, but beautiful. Or maybe that should be the other way around. ...I'm sorry.

I love the part about the italicized voices.