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| Which Mistake am I 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this and i now see what you mean that you have changed your writing style...to me its kind of wierd only because i can't tell what italized words aremenaing. Do you know what i'm talking about?? well anyway i still like the poem. |
| Ashelin 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Yeah, I know. I like horribly sad depressing things. But the last stanza was really good. Also I adored: "The tears in my eyes fill up my writing with cliché-ness. But at least, they take up lines." Great job, as always. Now I feel like writing... |
| Daiysis 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sad... poor perosn. An excellent display of hope without faith. Cool... I love when you write like this which is actually often... yay! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseSad, but beautiful. Or maybe that should be the other way around. ...I'm sorry. I love the part about the italicized voices. |