|Reviews for Guilty as Charged|
| Which Mistake am I 9/17/07 . chapter 1
I like this and i now see what you mean that you have changed your writing style...to me its kind of wierd only because i can't tell what italized words aremenaing. Do you know what i'm talking about? well anyway i still like the poem.
| Ashelin 9/16/07 . chapter 1
I really liked this. Yeah, I know. I like horribly sad depressing things. But the last stanza was really good. Also I adored:
"The tears in my eyes
fill up my writing with
But at least, they take
Great job, as always. Now I feel like writing...
| Daiysis 9/16/07 . chapter 1
This is so sad... poor perosn. An excellent display of hope without faith. Cool... I love when you write like this which is actually often... yay!
| a silenced revolution 9/15/07 . chapter 1
Sad, but beautiful. Or maybe that should be the other way around. ...I'm sorry.
I love the part about the italicized voices.