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Roskie 2009-11-24 . chapter 6
Wow if I were an anime character I would be staring at you with adoring, large, shiny shiny eyes.
Roskie 2009-11-24 . chapter 3
Hawt!
Taylor.J 2009-11-13 . chapter 6
Aw. Kale and Xander are adorable. Awesomeness! I know Sam wasn't the main character but I absolutely loved him. He's a lot like my friends- very caring, obsessive and slightly annoying. The whole Kale hiding in Sam's apartment fiasco was hilarious. Loved your story
Famirka 2009-09-26 . chapter 6
Well, yeah... Just that I'd say OMG HOLY FANTISTICAL AWESOMENESS BATMAN! before I pass out from lack of sleep.

...oh. haha.

Fam :D
Rennon 2009-07-23 . chapter 6
Excellent! I quite enjoyed reading this fine tale. What an interesting concept... quirky, yet adorably romantic. I probably could have lived without the gay-bashing part, but hey, it added a good bit of drama to the story so I suppose it was necessary. ;)
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-07-22 . chapter 6
i loved it.
blackstray 2009-07-17 . chapter 6
aw, what an adorable ending. i really ended up liking the plot because its something that can happen in real life. that not everyone is that accepting sadly... but it was still a sweet ending. haha, and i thought Bethany was in there to make Xander jealous but it turned out to be a twist in the end. XD
lazyxhime 2009-06-23 . chapter 6
Love soo much love! I LOVE it!

I hate Bethany.

But I love Xander and Kale!
Yusta 2009-06-20 . chapter 6
At first I was a little bit wary to read this story mainly because I think the summary didn't seem to bring me in as much. But after reading His Eyes from you, and knowing how much I loved that I thought I would try this one out. And I am so glad I did. This story gave me butterflies in my stomach. It is a lot more light than His Eyes and I can tell your writing has improved but this story is still just as amazing.

Thanks so much, keep it up.

-Yusta
blackstray 2009-06-12 . chapter 3
OMG!! he kissed him hurray!!
Gwee 2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Holy crap, that was adorable. ;w;
Hopelessly Involved 2009-02-04 . chapter 6
That was beautiful and cute. The story is well written and the plot is excellent. It givess off a warm fuzzy feeling. And even though it's 8:30 pm, I feel rather sleepy. I liked Bethany, shr kinda reminded me of myself before she said all those horrible things to Kale. I wonder why Jimmy was asking Kale all those questions. Anyway, keep up the good work.
McNP 2009-01-21 . chapter 3
AAH! *FLAILS* You are a professional at adorably awkward scenes and dialogue!!

Xander, Kale, just admit it! You like him!! You want to kis him!! (On the mouth.)

And how I agree. Death to poetry and Cicero.

L, Han
McNP 2009-01-21 . chapter 2
LOL!! "Are you gay?" Kale's like, "*cough splutter aghast* ...Maybe.."

Anyways: *sing-song* Xander and Kaale, laying in a bed! S-l-e-e-p-i-n-g!!

Lol, so cute!

Love Hananana

Ps- I misses you!
McNP 2009-01-19 . chapter 1
Ahahaha! It's Hannah. I totally found you by accident, lol. I was looking through stories and I saw the summary for this one and was like, "Ohh, that sounds good!" XD And then I looked at the author and I was like, "Holy shit!! It's Diana!!"

I'm loving this so far. It's really funny. And Kale is so cute and stupid, lol.

I'm totally going to spam you now. (I'm gonna try to comment on every chapter.)

Love, Hannah

NICE LATIN CLASS BY THE WAY. God, Cicero is annoying.
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