too. cute.

THIS WHOLE STORY WAS FUCKING AMAZING BYE

This story was absolutely great, I love the characters and the whole insomniac thing is something different, it made the story interesting from the start.

I read this story on a school night finishing it a 2:21 am and I have to get to school at 8:oo am, its all your fault for writing such a cute, amazing, and touching story! :(

This was one of my first stories I ever read on this site, and it is still one of my favorites. Even now, years later, when I am a different me, it still stirs something in me when I read it.

awww. that was so cute. Bethany is such a B*tch, but nice ending.

Don't you love Catullus' poems? My favourite is number 101. However, as we do his poems at GCSE, I rather doubt they'd have so much trouble translating them in university. My class have not even done A-Levels yet, and we managed to translate them. Isn't university is much more likely to be the Illiad? If the degree is Classics, with the Illiad in Ancient Greek, that is. I can't find just a Latin degree.

So lovely! This was a real pleasure to read- thank you for sharing!

very nice story...too bad it's not longer!

That was an interesting one. I liked the perspective in this and the confusion from Kale's POV. Bethany was a surprise, but it worked itself out.

I would have liked to see just a little more of the relationship development between Xander and Kale. Mostly because Xander came across as a little loopy in his biggest scene, so I was unsure of the sincerity.

Still a good read. Thanks.

Fantastic characters. Xander is my favourite, like a big teddy bear :) I have to admit, Kale kinda pissed me off in the last few paragraphs. I'm just not so into that dramatic crap ya know? Not that I'm dissing your writing. I actually find it quite humorous, especially the part where Xander was half asleep and screaming at Kale to turn the alarm off. So cute :D

Fatty

I LOVE this story, I put it on my favorites list forever ago but have read over and over again since then. There is something about it that is so great, it's sweet and charming and even though I've read it so many times I still really love it and just thought that after all this time it was ridiculous that I never reviewed it. Honestly if you put a book out of this story I would buy it the second it came out it's just so great!

This is adorable. I love how Xander is a huge mildy angry teddy bear. And what is with all this citris fruit? Mr. Tangerine, Mrs. Clemintine and now he smells like citris. Is there some sort of symbolism that I'm missing? either way, it's amusing as hell.

Nice story!

Wow if I were an anime character I would be staring at you with adoring, large, shiny shiny eyes.

Hawt!