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| Moondog Dozier 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseInterestingly true, and thought provoking. Well written. MD:77. |
| Daerb 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm in the strangest mood right now, chaty and giggles even. Just so you're warned. I may go on a reviewing spree. The street quality of your poetry is oddly atractive. I'm sure I've told you that before. I'm not sure of the context of this piece, but I do love the way you leave off - the implied silence at the end is suppose to make readers think of the qualities of such a silence? If so, very clever of you. StalkerX |
| empathic life 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it. Just the tone, and the absolutely magnificent way you cut it off all abruptly. One of those really profound poems, that just don't need any more words than necessary. Beautiful, as always. -e.l. |
| Fen-Shay 2007-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseMakes you think. I like it. |
| SirScott 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseSilence is a good weapon. ~SirScott |
| WyrdWolf 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI rather like this one in its entirety. I can't narrow it down, though, just overall liking-ness. Wolfie |